Supplanted

Supplanted love
abrades the hole,
widening sorrows
that kill the soul.



Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2009-07-30 at 03:04

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
Great wisdom in so few words. In terms of social impact, this is why so many second marriages fail if the first marriage was ended by divorce.
2009-08-01


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Well I did have to go running for the dictionary, but I'm glad I did. Thank You for sharing this succinct truth, and for widening by vocab.
2009-07-30



An interesting imagery is contained in these few lines. It sticks. Well done :)
2009-07-30


NicholasG
This an unfortunate truism. Souls do arise from ashes though.
Nice to have you back Melanie!
Nick
2009-07-30