You snored like an earthquake every night


With one blow you destroyed my world
Damn I'm glad I never screwed you
although you took advantage of me in
every other way

Emotionally and physically
you drained every last drop of what was me
when you stepped on my universe
and blew my brains out

Trust me when I say
See you in hell where you belong
and I'll haunt your soul
forever you and me, my ex lover




Words by Natalie
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Written on 2006-02-10 at 16:12

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ngaio Beck
Wow! Good writing! I think you're trying to say it's over.He must be some dude!
2008-11-13


Foolish
You are so good! I love to read your poems... Keep up the good work girl. Many hugs :)
2006-03-30


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
all emotions apart Natalie this is a beautiful poem and it shows through
but do i detect a glimmer of a torch in any event best wishes rgds mike
2006-02-19


Zoya Zaidi
Damn boy hell! as Angei, would say!
This is the way to go dear Natalei!
Blast the hell out of him, the ex. Be damned with him!
Good!
Feeling better after writing this?
I know, I am, after writing this coment!!!!

((((hugs daer Natalei, to make you bear up easy))))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-02-18


Zoya Zaidi
Damn boy hell! as Angei, would say!
This is the way to go dear Natalei!
Blast the hell out of him, the ex. Be damned with him!
Good!
Feeling better after writing this?
I know, I am, after writing this coment!!!!
2006-02-18


Marie
Blek. I know, people are so cruel!!!!

"Damn I'm glad I never screwed you"
Wow. Yup, had that EXACT feeling. EXACTLY. Not sure if you wanted to know that, but whatever.
2006-02-12


AngryAngel
Oh it feels like I've stepped right into the middle of a breakup. And I have havn't I?

Sometimes you need to have strong emotioins to write great poems, and you must have a lot of emotion since this poem is great.

Forget him!
2006-02-11