Just expressing how i think that all the people in our world arent awear of whats going on!


Numb

Numb

Are you numb?

Are you numb to the thought,
of loosing it all

Are you numb to the feeling,
that builds up inside

Are you numd to the people,
that try to guide,
to help escape the feelings inside

Are you numb to the friends,
that are always there

Are you numb,
to seeing what open eyes see?

Be awake!



Poetry by ZaK
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Written on 2006-02-10 at 21:22

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Rhia
You know i totally know where you are coming from on this one, if only. . .right. Great though, it's awesome
2006-02-21


PoeticProcrastination
This is great! Welcome to Poetbay!! ::::}
2006-02-12


boy
This is beautiful Zack.I totally agree with you.
Welcome to poetbay and enjoy
2006-02-11


CherryFairy
Very nice. Well done, and, welcome to poetbay. I'm recent myself, but... whatever.
I like your poem. It's lovely.
2006-02-11


Mary
yay! that was really good.. ahh soo many people to make me feel like a horrid writer it's not fair! anyway, that was really good but i also agree with the other guy that there is sometimes a sense of safety in that numbness but i'd rather know than not..hmmm thought provoking i guess!:D
2006-02-10


Andy
Fantastic. Welcome to poetbay!!!
2006-02-10