Please let me know if thereĀ“s any spelling errors...


Invisible cloak

I put the book
with the red cover
over the fine print
that was written
on the back of her eyes

her hair was burning
with white L:s

(...)

she gently awakes
puts her left foot
in my right mouth and
climbes my black hair

she pulls it over her like
an invisible cloak




Poetry by Amazingfriendlyapple
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Written on 2005-07-15 at 02:39

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
words oh words please bring me the song.
2005-07-16


epohonci
i don't get it?
2005-07-15


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
everything of the spelling here is fine except for "climbes" - should be climbs... :)

later...xx
2005-07-15