Just some random darkness
from a weird dream.

~L~


This Drowning One - Triolet




Do not try to rescue this drowning one,
my sinking ship you can not save,
for all outlets of help have been done
do not try to rescue this drowning one.
Only Death can relight the darkened sun
so leave me residing in my self-made grave,
do not try to rescue this drowning one,
my sinking ship, you can not save.

11/10/09



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-10-11 at 11:13

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Bjanka
...what a bitter sweet taste of weltschmerz there...beautiful writing...
2009-10-22


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
wow liz!
yet again you leave me wallowing
with pleasure :)
2009-10-22



Wow lizzy, this is brilliance from your darkness.

Have you been learning those forms again? lol

I love dreams, well most of them. They always become clear to me...much much later.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-10-21


Hans Bump
This is language created by the intimacy and immediacy of our thoughts and feelings expressed as one.
It is clear, raw, and shared as a genuine piece of the writer.
It is special in that way.
Thanks, Liz

Hans
2009-10-20


Amna Ehsan
Liz, be hopeful onle HE saves us.Trust Him and the life will be like stars sparkling in a deep blue night!
nice lines:)
2009-10-17


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Liz...I'm happy this is only from a dream...

good poem

xxx Stan
2009-10-11