(slightly revised)




Rumbling

tepid clouds

rumbling red

hugged the horizon

before us

as we watched

the winds wane

and the day dim dead

 

I stared at the moon

in your eyes

preening on purple

star speckled space

knowing I'd regret

tepid rumbling red

lips scorching face





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2009-11-22 at 12:52

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Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful!
2009-11-29


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Melanie Sue....this is a lovely poem...and thanks for staring
at the moon in my eyes

xxx Stan
2009-11-28


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2009-11-23