Reminders

The midnight sun reminds me of myself;

Alone; silent; beautiful.

The fireflies of the sky surround me;

But they do not speak.

They remind me of ourselves;

Distant; glowing; small.

The shade painted circular top to this world

Covers the harmful beyond.

It reminds me of you;

Mysterious; questionable; wonderful.





Poetry by Zoey xX
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Written on 2010-01-11 at 04:38

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Brian Oarr
"The shade painted circular top to this world

Covers the harmful beyond."

The remarkable metaphor of these two lines make your beautiful poem, Zooey. Thank you for showing us in the lower-48 your incredible view of the world.

Brian
2010-01-23


J. E.
Wow, this is so beautiful! This appeals to me beyond belief! The best I've read in here for quite a while, no doubt. You paint magnificent and mysterious pictures here. Timeless! Ethereal perfection, this is. Congratulations, and THANKS!
2010-01-18


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2010-01-18


cory Crook
Nice poem its true u are amazingly beautiful . were are u from. I will read more by u. U intrigue me I'm curious
2010-01-11