You used to sing


I whisper your name in the shadows
but you can't hear those words
Someone cries and you're to blame
Struggling with a fight in your mind

You never sing like you did before
You used to sing to me
All the feelings that you hide
are gonna tear you up inside

And both of us will die
Angels Can fall from the sky




Words by Natalie
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Written on 2006-02-19 at 18:26

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
three words -
LOVE IT
and
*BOOKMARKED*
Liz.
2006-02-28


Troll
DadadaDamn !!!! (teach me to write like that?) :)
2006-02-24


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
This is so beautiful and dark. Ripped peices of paper curling and frothing to a purple and black flame - a sense of wonderous beauty that although is unique, is also catching your breath.

Fantastic.

xxxx
2006-02-23


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
A brilliant and emotive poem, Natalie.
2006-02-23


Bekim Rauseo
wow natalie kudos on this one, i like it but dont worry someone else will sing for You
2006-02-22


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
This conveys the thought and emotions so well. Beautifully arranged.
2006-02-19


AngryAngel
Oh absolutely beautiful!
Love it love it love it!
2006-02-19


Zoya Zaidi
I agree with you,
He sang to you,
Was much better,
Without those fellings,
The song can't be fun!
The Spring always,
Is sweeter then Autumn.
But why is this wish to die,
This, I am sure, I don't understand why?
2006-02-19