Roar Seaweed



Took my pain to sea
I screamed at the ocean
It just waved back....



Poetry by Purple Phoenix
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Written on 2010-01-17 at 08:48

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Brian Oarr
A tasty creme brule this piece. So delcious you want for more. We all love the ocean, but it's a heartless bitch. Well said, Rache.

Brian
2010-01-23


J. E.
A very neat write. The ending is somehow calm despite the pain. I really like this.
2010-01-17


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Imagen if you can ,
A field of cabbages ,
At night ,
Close the the beech ,
With seaweed washed ,
Up ,
The longing to be breathing ,
In, the city air.
2010-01-17