Hot Springs

I am
an unplumbed
well spring
of love,
unlearned,
waiting for
your lambent lips
to taste my fountain
and make it
bubble
again.

 

Author's Note: What a beautiful day it is here. I went outside in my backyard with my coat on at 1 pm.I just came in and it is almost 2:30 and it warmed up so much I had to take my coat off. And while out there soaking up some glorious sun rays, I felt inspired to have some sensual fun with word-play. :)

Posted on 01/18/2010





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2010-01-18 at 21:28

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Bob Simpson
May your fountain always bubble!! :-)
2010-01-27



very suggestive.
so tastefully written though.
i love it!
nicely done.
-killy
2010-01-19


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Melanie Sue

I'm drinking a toast to your fountain bubbling again...

Lovely poem...and I must say, it inspired my imagination

xxx Stan
2010-01-18


Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
It is very well done!
Both the form and the words
Thanks!
2010-01-18