On a mission people, gotta be strong!


I Give Up!



Old friend,
The day has come,
I can no longer abide your ways,
The way you chew through my money
Stink up my house,
My breath

My kids don't like you,
Never have,
To continue our relationship
Would only cause me to suffer
Shorten my breath,
My life

I banished you
From my new car
Next is my household,
My lungs, my entire existence
Goodbye to you
My fags!





Poetry by Purple Phoenix
Read 584 times
Written on 2010-01-23 at 07:11

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Dee Daffodil
Hey !! Good for you !!! You only think they're your friends...but they aren't. Very crearive...very enjoyable !
Hugs,
Dee
2010-01-27



oh gee..
reminds me of how i need 2 stop smoking..
one of the few resolutions i havent kept yet..
hah.
nicely written darlin.
hope u can successfully banish the damn things.
-killy
2010-01-23



Tons of good luck to you. I just passed the 125 hour mark, and am pretty unstable myself, and I do think I enjoy it too(the end of grey), cause, I have been preparing this moment for years, was actually planning it for later, but got my mind upset, so I can just as well do it now, atleast my mind will be out of order, for some time, I think... hope you are doing much better than me... this read/ your write ... like it very much. Yea... I think alot like that too atm... and your words are so perfect... so I dont need to write anything.... double, no triple Thanks :)
2010-01-23


Brian Oarr
There's an incomparable sense of freedom the day you realize you've put the smokes behind you forever. I'll be rooting like all get out for you, Rache!

Brian
2010-01-23



Good luck with your divorce from tobacco. I'm glad I never started smoking, because I know so many people who found giving it up one of the most difficult thing in their lives--but well worth it.

William
2010-01-23


NicholasG
You can do it! In many ways cigarettes are the antithesis of music.
Cheers!!
2010-01-23



My fags?? omg!! let it rip baby!! I think fags are cigs right??lol.. you tell it like it is and never tell it like its not..Hmm you know what I mean.,,,,work it!!

hugs of many

Cyn
2010-01-23