a haiku


religion


flapping in the wind
stickie-outie straw for brains
all the crows long gone



Poetry by Rob Graber
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Written on 2010-02-11 at 16:23

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John Ashleigh
Haiku is a challenge - but you've pulled it off wonderfully. A beautiful write, as usual.

Regards,
John.
2010-12-04



I like...i like...i love
2010-07-24



Yes, why not - a good picture, although part of me wants to protest on behalf of the scarecrows -- such gentle, heroic creatures, really ;o)
2010-02-12


workoutrules
;-) I saw this in my mind,photo imagery,,and chuckled:)
but still don't understand Haiku!!Bless you:)
silliness is the best of meds and I have a caselot full upon my brain infestation with straw ;P
2010-02-11


Rob Graber
The scarecrow metaphor is, I think, here meant as a cartoon in words: a funny sketch to draw the mind toward some serious ideas. As to tongue location: maybe more "partly" than "firmly" in cheek...

:-,?

Thanks!
2010-02-11


shells
Is your tongue firmly in your cheek? Loved the analogy if that's the right word. I'm also very fond of Haiku.
2010-02-11