I overheard the opening line in a conversation
and I wanted to make every line rhyme. A
more positive poem.

~L.~


Perplexing Only Dampens




Perplexing worries of troubled mind
inner peace, it seems SO hard to find,
I can not see I am blind
need release from these chains that bind,
someone, please, send me a sign
that I am getting it right this time
constantly moving to a different rhyme
and always more then a step behind,
Life's cruel to those who are kind,
but, it only dampens my Star's shine.

03/03/10



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-03-09 at 09:08

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Brian Oarr
Alright, that's more like it then. You're warming up. I sense a sockdolager on the horizon.

Brian
2010-03-09


NicholasG
Life is perplexing to anyone who believes in kindness.
But those who are heartless are obviously mindless
For, when we are kind, we are full of care
So often step where others don't dare
And... remember, to be a step behind
Is to be poised and ready for the finish line.
As often as not a dark horse comes through
Keep running Liz. The smart money's on you.
2010-03-09