My poetry is on the lines of jim morrison( The Doors). It calls on weaknesses or soft spots in one's psychi I'll include others after this. I just want to get actual feedback from anybody. This poem is a story of someone, anyone having deep rooted probl


Detatchment

It's about death and defiance.
Trying to, strive for guidance
in a cynical reality.
Walking towards a counselor of barbaric purportions,
Distortion of speech spoken
to encourage one's feeble existence.
Hands reach inward
snatching one's heart
to avoid the madness of vocal converse.



Poetry by anila-alzina
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Written on 2006-02-26 at 09:57

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GB
This is the end , beautiful friend
This is the end , my only friend
The end of our elaborate plans
The end of everything that stands
The end ........
Hi ... I don't have deep rooted probs , but I do know of some people WHO do ... and as such can understand where or why they're going , or coming from .
Anyway ..... Well written and thought of ... has meaning in a smokey haze of disallusionment ( ? ) .... Glen ( GB )
2006-02-26