a promise


A Loveletter In Blood

Give me a razor
I'll sign across my heart
I love you
I die when we're apart


Give me a razor
I'll sign across my chest
The pain I feel is the best
To remind me that it's you
keeping me alive
Temporarily ending my strife


Give me a dagger
I'll sign it down my arm
Only you can make me feel warm


Give me an icicle, sharpened and cold
to deepen the hole
that swallows my soul

Give me a hook to rip out my heart
to make this lonely feeling depart




Poetry by Christabel
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Written on 2006-02-26 at 14:02

Tags Blood  Love  Heart 

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Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
An interesting thought. Well portrayed. An enjoyable read.

"Give me an icicle, sharpened and cold
to deepen the hole
that swallows my soul"

So very good this stanza.
2006-02-26


GB
Wow ! ..Such powerful sentiments .... But yes , a very good read with passion and need . LIKE !!!!! ..... Glen ( GB )
2006-02-26