*Some days I feel depressed due to circumstances that has lead to my separating from my husband. Overall, though, I am doing much better.


Solo Night

I have Demons of Invention
that are like a Prayer of Light.

They Solo in Dimensions
then disappear from my sight.

I dream Reality's untold Truth
and Wake up soaked among my tears.

They glisten as they damn the Gloom,
engulfed in unwombed years.





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2010-06-02 at 14:21

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chuma okafor
In your deep expressive words i relate with you and feel with you... beautiful piece of poetry and exuding powerful emotions...i wish you strength and God's love and peace of mind.Cheers,dearest one!
2010-06-21


shells
Poigniant words, in the loneliness of night thoughts arrive. So glad you are doing much better, small steps.....
2010-06-03


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Dear Melanie...When a poem can evoke as much
empathy as yours has done, when the reader can feel your
quandry, you know you've written a very worthy piece...

Incidentally, I love the phrase, "Reality's untold truth"

Hope thing get better for you real soon

xxx Stan
2010-06-03


Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
I am glad to see you again

Your beautiful words touch my heart
2010-06-02


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Very touching words; I can see sadness and beauty in them.

I hope your days pass easily, and it also nice to see you again.
2010-06-02


NicholasG
It's nice to have you back Melanie. Things will improve without doubt. I can see your way with words has not been lost.
Nick
2010-06-02