a silly poem


Summer Pop

I shall eat a summer pop
and dance at night until I drop...
You may join me, if you're glad.
I don't hang out folks quite mad.

LOL!



Poetry by Lavender Blue
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Written on 2010-06-10 at 04:59

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Rob Graber
Oops! I meant, "by a master"!
2010-06-10


Rob Graber
A cute and whimsical write to a master of the genre. I am wondering if line 4 wants "with"?

PS: Nice 2 C U resurface here!
2010-06-10


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