From a dream.

~L.~


A Pool Into



Drip, splash, drip,
tears into a pool on the floor,
Tap, tap, BANG!
impatient knocks at the locked door.

Isolated, stranded, alone,
breaking heart can break no more,
caged, trapped, FREE!
revenge still has to settle a score.

BANG! Tap, tap,
knocks of impatience at locked door,
Drip, drip, splash,
a pool of broken tears on the floor.

01/07/10





Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-07-01 at 11:24

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Mr.Mist
Hi, Lizzy!

A real good write from u! ;o)
Lots of feeling out into thoose words!

Take care!

-Mr.M

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2010-07-08


Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
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2010-07-05


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow girl! This is one of your best poems!! Honestly! Well done! *applause*

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2010-07-05


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Liz...this sounds like one helluva dream

xxx Stan

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2010-07-02