Theres something about him, that makes me want to write this things, these feelings, but there is no way to capture them. I wonder does he feel the same. I don't know. . . but maybe you do.


About Him

Theres something about him. . .
something that makes want to run to him
a feeling overcomes me,
a feeling of compassion,
a feeling of great happiness.
Then when he's not near
I can hear his voice in my ear
I feel his touch on my shoulder
I smell the air, and catch a whif of his scent
All my energies are spent.
Thinking of him,
dreaming of him,
wanting to please him.
The image of him is still fresh in my mind.
I can picture his face,
everylast detail, and I wonder.
Does he remember me this way?
Does he care enough to think of me?
I don't really know his mind.
I can't read him,
can he read me?





Poetry by Rhia
Read 1141 times
Written on 2006-02-28 at 02:28

Tags Him  Wonder  Thoughts 

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Tabitha Campbell
very nice it reminds me of... ME. I feel the same way about a certain guy. Great work and thanks!!!
2006-06-11


Christian Ward
Such a sweet poem!
2006-02-28


Zoya Zaidi
How beautifully you put your feelings for him,
I am sure he thinks of you as tenderly,
The one who can evoke such lovely feelings,
I sure to love you, the way you love him,
Tell him, you love him, and then see?

(((((Hugs for some solace, till you tell him)))))

WElcome to poetBay Rhia!

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-02-28


Jen
I loved your poem! Awesome job. Reading it made feel as though you were describing me, and my feelings for the "eye of my soul" ......... great read! :)
2006-02-28


Ian
u moron u posted it twice.hahahahaha idiot. it was good.
2006-02-28