First Breath

When I met you you gave me a star, the very glint of a feeling, so pure and grand, that I dismissed it's existence, and the diamonds before me, dissolved into sand.

When I held you we melted, and bled into one, yet I was ignorant, stubborn, and the bonds we relied on, were slowly undone.

Without you I withered, yet it opened my mind, and my soul took it's first breath, and it showed me my crime,

And I found you in heaven, found the key to the door, and reading our story, it is you I adore,

I emphatically state then, that not only will I, worship your wonder, but never cease to try





Poetry by Che Thomas
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Written on 2010-08-06 at 13:38

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2010-08-09


shells
Loved your first two lines and of course the rest of it, sounds like two people are very lucky.
2010-08-08


LittleEm
Beautiful :)
2010-08-07



very tochable lines indeed , a real talent to express on love .
Thanks alot for share it us ,.
2010-08-06