This is just something I felt like writing, because it came to my mind when I was on my school bus... Then I listened to a sad song...


Invisible

Sometimes I wonder
Day after day;
Am I doing something wrong?
Should I even bother?

Everything passes by
So thickly and in slow motion,
Why don't I cry?
Have I lost the feeling of emotion?

Oceans apart from where you are
Years away from what I want,
Don't be surprise if I'm not here tomorrow;
I had to find my way out of sorrow.

I'm not asking you to stop me,
But you should,
No one is making me stay
But you could.

I'm sorry that you can't see me,
And I hope someday you will,
My loneliness would kill
If I wasn't strong enough to breath.



Poetry by Sketch0117
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Written on 2010-09-28 at 03:56

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Rob Graber
I like this, especially lines 5 and 6. Also, there is a simple perfection to stanza 4. The poem's final word probably should be "breathe."
2010-11-03