Thought I'd try a sonnent, I wrote it backwards so I hope it

makes sense & I used different colours to help me with the rhyme.

 

&am


Wonderful Way[Sonnet]

 

 

 

Yes, Life can be quite a heel,

a roundabout of in and out and up and down

drag you down and in the dumps you feel

but trust me, there is no need to frown,

A terriffic person, yes YOU ARE!

you don't believe that cos you are so sad

we believe in you because we KNOW you'll go far

Trust me, your faults are not that bad

Upset I do not like to see you,

so i'm turning up the brightness dial

just in Life to help you get through,

and I'll send you the biggest sunshine smile,

Apart from a beautiful start to your day

 I hope many wonderful things appear your way.

 

08/10/10





Sonnet by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-10-08 at 01:47

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Liz...you write better backwards than most folk do forward

lovely sonnet

xxx Stan
2010-12-01


Kshiti Dubey
This is well written and cheerful. I like it very much!
2010-11-15


Rob Graber
The colors nicely call attention to the rhyme scheme of the Shakespearean sonnet (ababcdcdefefgg)!
2010-10-08