Love is a beautiful swirl of colors. Only when you give it your all though is it a moving portrait.


Our Love is a Painting

Our love is a painting
a beautiful mass of colors
created with care
and wonderful to look at
but thats it.
An entertainment piece
a picture with no feeling,
a picture unmoving, unchanging.

Our love is a painting
and my soul is held fast by the brush strokes
The strokes of red, blue, green, and yellow.
An incomplete painting
for without your soul
it will never be.

Lend yourself to my brush
let your heart guide my hand.
show me YOU
show yourself to me,
and become a part of my painting.

Let your soul melt
with the colors of mine.
Let our paint mix
let the painting become a masterpiece
Let our love grow,
Give in.
Let it be a painting that goes down in history

Let our love become a beautiful painting
of two,
no longer one.



Poetry by Rhia
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Written on 2006-03-07 at 03:12

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Zainab
this is beautiful! good write
Rate:5
2006-06-12


Zainab
this is beautiful! good write
Rate:5
2006-06-12


kip
...the symbolism in this poem is certainly thought provoking, a masterpiece this is, a painting in words...love the creativity in it and certainly fancy the originality...good work...
2006-03-07


c g shankar
"Let our love become a beautiful painting
of two,
no longer one." yes rhia dear, your understanding of love is truly depicted in this poem. great work. .......with love, ceegee
2006-03-07


SlipThruCracks
This makes an amazing picture in my mind.

Like woah.

I just... keep rereading. And loving.
2006-03-07