I'm loving the life I live. I'm so lucky. - 26th November 2010.


The Orient.

With Samurai seas immersing over me,
My thoughts start to freeze.
Of orient capes and solicit landscapes,
Spoils and faults its belief.

Autumn leaves say, when it enveils the day,
To aspire for the chance to stay.
Ethnic flavours embark on a bedded regret,
Still awaiting on the sun to set.



Poetry by John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-11-26 at 17:19

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Ferenc Inigo Beck
Clever piece. How vast is the human spirit.
2010-12-02



I can see, sitting on a rock, toward the end of the day
a life reminiscent and a future awaiting the interlude
brought about by a night's repose. For this I could be thankful at the end of each day. Nice poem.
2010-11-28


Tango
A very good picture of autumn with all its glory.
Tango.
2010-11-26


NicholasG
Fine descriptive poem of somewhere I'd prefer to be than in the snow :-)
Hope life remains as palatable as it is now.
Nick
2010-11-26


melanie sue
I love rhyme if well done such as this one is, intermingled with juicy choice words. EXCELLENT!
2010-11-26



It's good to see the world in rhyme. A unique poem.
2010-11-26