Dive

Serpiginous peccancy explodes
and corrodes the veneer of repose,
leaving it naked and exposed
to the trenchant tongues
that indulge the morose.

I dive into the sublime
waters cried by the night,
gilded and slippery sleek,
finding tranquility in the deep
as it muffles the quiver of my heartbeat. 

 

 

serpiginous-from Medieval Latin, from Latin serpere to creep]definition(medical)-slowly spreading especially : healing over in one portion while continuing to advance in another

World English Dictionary peccant (ˈpɛkənt) — adj 1. guilty of an offence; corrupt 2. violating or disregarding a rule; faulty 3. producing disease; morbid from Latin peccans, from peccāre to sin] 'peccancy — n

trench·ant   –adjective 1. incisive or keen, as language or a person; caustic; cutting: trenchant wit.





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2010-11-28 at 01:01

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NicholasG
This is word-wizardry, and leaves me with a grin, and larger vocabulary!
Thank you Melanie!
2010-11-28


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Brilliant. The words you have used are deep, and the mood - just amazing. Also, putting the definitions after the poem is a good idea - it makes the poem stand out more clearly. Keep writing, Melanie.

Rergards,
John.
2010-11-28



When the need to express seems to outweigh the ability to express, turn to the arts, there is always a way. You do it so well.

jim
2010-11-28