Eloping


tis with carelessness
now
that life will be approcahed
for the derision
long cause of indecision
often casting an incision
into the heart of all my hopes
no longer has me on the ropes
as I elope
with the simplicity
of freedom



Poetry by Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-12-19 at 15:24

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Keiko
Very well written keep up the good work.
2011-02-13


shells
Sounds like you have had a "lightbulb moment" long may it shine, you have yourself sussed, the simplicity of freedom, I like that. Nice to see you posting.
2010-12-19


John Ashleigh
Beautiful structure, and a well explained mood. Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
John.
2010-12-19


NicholasG
Eli, you have found the gilded ladder!
Bravo on the find and the writing.
Happy Holidays, Nick
2010-12-19