Love candy

Once, I was walking through narrow paths

Pulling my heavy shadow behind my back

Heading towards no where

While I was walking with two steps ahead and one back

I saw a candy shop, said to my self, I will try it, why not!

I tasted it once, and I wish if I never did,

now I am addicted to it..





Poetry by Libyan Rose
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Written on 2011-01-09 at 18:12

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John Ashleigh
Very fruitfull and pretty. You're good at showing us your true emotions. :)

Your friend,
John.
2011-02-24


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Aw so cutely descriptive!Thanks for sharing! *applause and bookmark* :) A joy to read!
2011-01-17



A sweet poem, but deceptively simple. I love the way you write—"pulling a heavy shadow behind my back... "

Not a bad addiction, love. Or candy.

jim
2011-01-12