Dark +light=your eyes

 

The hope back from your dark eyes

I see his light

Proud to live there

Where your pour soul

Wearing the honesty coat

In all weather

In all seasons

However the world got evil and dark

U still keeping the light

U still believe in good

Will never die

If people believe





Poetry by Libyan Rose
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Written on 2011-12-01 at 01:17

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John Ashleigh
I can tell this has sentiment. A heart-felt write. The brevity of the poem only adds to the vivid and piercing emotion. An accomplished poem of which I thoroughly enjoyed. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
2011-12-01