mouthtraps

he set a trap

of plethora

then slew her with

his cruelty

as they watched

her voice

pour

etc.

etc.

etc.

onto

the unblemished

white tiled floor





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2011-04-10 at 17:10

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chuma okafor
The words of this poetry is quite revealing,the images are eye opener and the theme is not tainted by complete personal experience!
2011-04-14


countryfog
The play-on-words title belies the stunning slaughter that follows. I'll not look at a white tiled floor again and not think of this.
2011-04-11



That produced a powerful visual ...
those white tiled floors just speak
with words poured out from a slain heart.
2011-04-11