Writing after a 2 year dry spell.


The Bottom of Deception

It goes through
Cuts like a knife
Twisted in my stomach
Pull it out quickly
My blood is on your hands
Get on your knees
Beg as I fall down the steps
It is a long way
To the bottom of deception
I will try to make the landing
Softer next time
It is inevitable
We all return
To the only darkness known.



Poetry by Adrienne
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Written on 2011-04-30 at 10:26

Tags Deception  Falling 

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John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Dark and deep - it is good that your dry spell has ended. This is a very accomplished poem, a very good write indeed. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
2011-05-01