Some passing thoughts from an idea that has been trying to make sense within me for some time now.




This precious life


life

is too precious

to risk

being placed in a category

of being too precious





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Written on 2011-05-28 at 05:03

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Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
Some people fear death so much
that they are never living

Very well written
N T
2013-06-19



To me, this poem is about caution, and remembering to throw it to the wind occasionally, to take the kind of risks (whatever they may be) that offers the rewards of feeling ALIVE.

Simply written, not a word too many, nor too few. Clear as a bell.
2011-05-29