Love starts with a kiss!


Magic of kiss!

Each kiss you gift me
Makes my resistance dilute!
sun rays melt ice nice!



Poetry by c g shankar
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Written on 2006-03-16 at 12:21

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Malin Johansson
That magic kiss is above everything,
So wonderful...
Great written in so few words...
2006-03-19


Troll
It's good, but the "ice nice" makes it feel like it was written by a child. Perhaps that's just to give it a childlike, innocent feel?
2006-03-17


lynn
awww.. this is so beautiful great job dad!!!
love from your daughter al :)
2006-03-16



nice, nice, niice!!!
2006-03-16


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
yeah man this is so smooth the first kiss is as explained in this poem rgds mike
2006-03-16