josephus
This searing minimalist poem is intense in its brevity and structure. It leaves the reader with visions of stark hopelessness in a Satlinesque world. Extremely well written.
2015-05-02

countryfog
The few words, dwindling . . . all the frigid white space between . . . usually I don't pay much attention to form, but this is perfect and necessary, a minimalist sketch drawn with just a few lines, something like Siberia must look.
2011-08-18

Well, v/t/t...
Frosty! I shiver a little. You capture well the chilly season, and the lack of coal finds resonance in the sparsity of the piece.
A solid write!
2011-08-18