An exploration of a theme bothering me lately. The background story is based in real life, but stylized to give a different impression in order to make contrasts in the poem.
a first impression that leaves traces upon ones heart
I met him in our laughter and joy of the world
seeing me laugh, he was the first to grab my hand
and catch me when he saw me cry
an understanding of those things I love and live for
unfortunately contrasted to
an understanding of my emotional nature and day-to-day persona
Touching upon someone
in some mode
I show them my side of the situation we are in
and they show me theirs
How then to show the other sides?
without contrasting or confirming their first impressions
The first moment one speaks
that first glance one catches of the other person
becomes the defining moment
colouring the every following moments
How then can I say?
"I know you"
and furthermore
"I love you"
Poetry by SecretWords
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Written on 2011-08-24 at 20:43
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Confirmation Bias
I meet you in the depth of those things that we lovea first impression that leaves traces upon ones heart
I met him in our laughter and joy of the world
seeing me laugh, he was the first to grab my hand
and catch me when he saw me cry
an understanding of those things I love and live for
unfortunately contrasted to
an understanding of my emotional nature and day-to-day persona
Touching upon someone
in some mode
I show them my side of the situation we are in
and they show me theirs
How then to show the other sides?
without contrasting or confirming their first impressions
The first moment one speaks
that first glance one catches of the other person
becomes the defining moment
colouring the every following moments
How then can I say?
"I know you"
and furthermore
"I love you"
Poetry by SecretWords
Read 528 times
Written on 2011-08-24 at 20:43
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