welL seriously i am realLy bad wif titles!! :/....welL this is jus another poem that lets out my feeling i guess.


Life...thr0ugh the eyes of

Lost, at times,
Sometimes hopeless,
I dont wanna live my life being just a "girl in a pretty dress"

Unwanted, Unimportant,
At times i am resistant.

People look through me,
Like there's nothing more to me than what meets the eye,
Like there's nothing more to me than what they can see,
It's like they choose to believe the lie.

Betrayed by friends,
Been waiting for alL this to end,
But it happens alL over again.

Everything i do,
Seems to offend you,
I dont wanna live like this,
My whole life has been a crisis.

I wish some one could take me away,
To a happy place.
Dont deal with me like im a critical case.
I know im not perfect either,
My life's been soo messy,
And i really need a breather.

I wanna be myself,
Not live my life;
Tryin' to impress some one else.

Yeah, i have a great dad,
But everything else is messed up, pretty bad.

Sometimes i wish i was part of a fairy tale,
And save my life from being an epic fail.

I dont wanna wake up from my sleep anymore,
My wounds are stilL sore,
And i am hurt to the core.

Could this get any worse?
It's like im the victim of a terrible curse.
And my dreams seem to be the only better place,
Where my life isnt just some cat and mouse chase.

I'm sick and tired of this now,
I need to get outta here somehow.

I wanna be happy,
I wanna live.
I wanna be loved,
And love, i wanna give.






























Poetry by aquadragon
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Written on 2011-12-28 at 10:47

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Few see what they are looking at
So many look with eyes shut
Just smile fore they will soon
Have a rude awakening
By then you would of moved on
With a smile still beemeing as ever bright
You will love and be lovde aye that you will
Ken ( D Williams )
2012-04-10


Jalaj Soni
BEAUTIFUL!!!
WHAT AN EXTREMELY EXPRESSIVE POEM!!

You should be proud.
Its very angrily written but you've done what I generally fail to do.. 'let things out'

title isn't bad, you know :P

But are you sure your life is REALLY THAT screwed up?
I mean, most of the time we do this.
I do this ALL THE TIME :P

Think about it, do you think this poem shows how your life is?
(don't get me wrong, its not SUPPOSED to show that.. Its supposed to show what you think, which is perfectly presented.)

Try analyzing your life from a third person's point of view...
You'll know that it isn't all that messed up after all :)

Keep Writing :D
2011-12-29


Blilith
Please keep on posting. The sense of loss and despair is so obviouse to me, I have been there. You have talent, let it out.
Please visit my page, I think we have much in common.

Be Blessed
Blilith the Witch ( Yes, really)
2011-12-28


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Lovely written:) I consider those lines as a melodic poem within a poem:

'My wounds are stilL sore,
And i am hurt to the core.

Could this get any worse?'

Truth is that am currently writing a poem about the (As I call them) flame readers that read a flame without feeling their own inner flame while throwing their own ashes on it . . . ;)

As you describe it:

'People look through me,
Like there's nothing more to me than what meets the eye,
Like there's nothing more to me than what they can see,
It's like they choose to believe the lie.'


but you have a strong inner flame, like here:

'I wanna be myself,
Not live my life;
Tryin' to impress some one else.'

'I wanna be happy,
I wanna live.
I wanna be loved,
And love, i wanna give.'

Thank you for sharing with us your poem:) thank you for this reading experience:)
2011-12-28