Whirlpool

All these feelings deep inside
Seem to haunt me day and night.
In green pastures
And where satan dwells,
They never go away.

Everyday it's getting worse
In a whirlpool is where I dwell.





Poetry by krii
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Written on 2011-11-04 at 12:28

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Melissa Ormond
I enjoyed reading this! It isn't hard to imagine that our own thoughts may one day drive us insane, I spotted the imagery used with the world 'whirlpool', wether that was intentional or not is another matter. If I was one to rate other people then I would say that this is a very good write!(:
2011-11-06