Putting #47 into larger perspective...


Like Uncle Ikey Used To Say #48


in our own little circles
we aint all that big

an in the big circle
all of us combined
amount ta nothin

er perty close to it



Poetry by Rob Graber
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Written on 2011-11-18 at 16:08

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Love the colloquial, conversational style of the poem. An insightful truism that pretty much sums it up. Good work, as usual.
2011-12-03


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2011-11-29


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hey Rob...this is a very clever little piece of writing with
much insight...congratulations...After reading it, I must say
you are most certainly not close to nothin

Stan
2011-11-20


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I know, and I know that I'm to blame.
2011-11-19