dad

Why did you start drugs,
you knew it would wreck your life,
I dont even see you because I think that you are scared to show my brother & I what you look like,
We have not seen you in two years & you never call because you are scared,
You know that im going to wip your ass & make you take a long look at your self if you are not scared to show your face to us,
drugs has done this to you & drugs might put you out ,
Dad why have you done this it don't make you better,
it makes me want to kick your ass for it,
Drugs can be fatal & I hope you know that because if you keep it up you know that your not going to live much longer



Poetry by shane
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Written on 2006-03-24 at 17:46

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UnforgivenAngel
wow,you put alot of emotion in this.
(((hugs to make you feel better)))
2006-03-26


Zoya Zaidi
Your anguish comes off very poignantly in this poem; you have really given good vent to your feeling!
I only have one reservation; you are kicking your dad off one too many times in the ass...(may be it's the Indian in me?) It kind of takes the dignity out of the noble concern you have for your father.

((((((Hugs for a poem powerfully written))))

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-25


Justin
well man I know how you feel except its with my mom. by the went I went to the doctor for my poison ivy and thats why I wasn't there for fourth.
2006-03-25


Samantha
Shane, this is one of the best poems i've read that actually means something! Just thought id let you know that! Keep up the good work and everything will be ok! (^_^)
2006-03-25


lynn
oh my god this is such a sad poem i really hope everything turns out and the best of luck with your dad!!!
amber lynn (al)
2006-03-24