Aww, you're amazing!


Everyday
you're on my mind
Affecting my thoughts

And I love you now
And I hate you now

You wrapped your feelings
Around my heart
Gently, and then you tore it apart

Take my hand
and change your life!
Help me arise..

And I love you now
And I hate you now

Let me drown in your eyes
Without being careful

Help me smile again




Poetry by Oskar
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Written on 2006-03-26 at 14:45

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Natalie
Loove this :)
2006-04-02


she
I agree.... YOU are amazing!!!!!!.I really empathise with the part that goes:
"You wrapped your feelings
Around my heart
Gently, and then you tore it apart.

That brings back a lot of skeletons that were safely hidden away in a dark chest at the bottom drawer of my cupboard.You write well, Oskar, never let that part of you go............................love,She
2006-03-30


Troll
and i love you now
and i hate you now

powerful words and thoughts all throughout it, hey look i am a fan now (my momma was an air conditioner :p)

"without being careful"

reckless, passionate

................just plain good writing :)
2006-03-26


Zoya Zaidi
"You wrapped your feelings
Around my heart
Gently, and then you tore it apart"

Unique-reads like a song!
Very good rhyme and rhytnm!
(((hugs))
love, xxx,Zoya
2006-03-26