My girlfriend recently left me, so wrote this and gave this to her as I officially said goodbye and collect my stuff, the majority is serious but the end was added so she would not cry. Putting it on here so in the future I may read it once more, as the o


This isn't a lovesong, this is goodbye

Spent last night
Laid awake again
Haven't slept
Since god know's when

Miss you like hell
Broken heart again
Wish it was back
To how it was back then

Your cheek on my chest
The scent of your hair
You tasted so sweet
You left me without a care

Thee look in your eyes
The feel of your lips
I'd give my life
If I got one more kiss

Now that you're gone
I cannot think straight
To just see your smile
I simply cannot wait
You wanted a poem
so I wrote you a song
Not to get you back
but to say bye before you're gione

I do still love you
And i wish you good luck
But if you hurt me again
Well... you can get fucked



Poetry by cohen fox
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Written on 2012-02-28 at 19:36

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shells
Heartbreak is hard, but happiness is out there waiting, unexpected ending!
2012-02-29


Melissa Ormond
An extremely heart felt piece! It's moving, how you felt about her, how you still feel. Nobody can take away the experience or the memories from you Cohen, only yourself if you choose to do so. Not many people choose to end relationships in agreement, in a sensible and mature way like this text suggests and so I congratulate you on that, it's not easy!

Love is a marvellous thing if it's true, and I do genuingly believe that your relationship was true but that doesn't mean you can't find someone else out there, you deserve it!

Just remember one thing - You are not alone.

I enjoyed the read!

Oh one more thing ...

Welcome back to the bay, hope you will be making a more regular appearance?

Keep writing and smiling!:)
2012-02-28



Remember the good times. You'll be a lot happier.
2012-02-28