In response to Jon


You only came to me this morning

You only came to me this morning,
When the coffee was hot.
To offer up a silent warning
of what we are not...
After all these years of warming
up to your heart,
After all these years of gaining
some footing to start
A kind of relationship brewing
between our hearts,
Just when I started thinking,
Now the iron was hot
To strike and start moulding
you closer to my heart,
Just when I thought smooth sailing
Is beginning to start,
You come up with a silent warning
of what we are not,
And say it, all the while smiling,
Let's begin from the start!
And I knew things are beginning
between us to thwart...



Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright©: Zoya Zaidi




Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-03-31 at 19:51

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pia
Oh this is an excellent excellent poem !!! How words can hurt - especially if they are said the wrong way at the wrong time How painful it is to be at two very different stations in life but still trying to make the same journey....I love your poem Excellent!!!
2006-04-15


Teala
Unrequited Love???
2006-04-10


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Great job Zoya.

I have a challenge poem of my own for you
because you have done so well with this response to Jon's poem.
Liz.
2006-04-02


Malin Johansson
This one captured me... You write so well, that the words becomes to pictures in my mind... Great written Zoya!!!
2006-04-01


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
the promise of unspoken dreams are often wilted by the silence of a heart or a loved one as the lady says
2006-04-01



A silent warning can sometimes be enough to cause beautiful promises to wither...
Great job Zoya!
2006-04-01


penfold18
Once again you strike when the irons hot Zoya ,you truely have a way with words.
2006-04-01


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
You ran with the challenge well. A good read.
2006-04-01


Jon Hanover
I keep getting blown away by all these poems. Great poem my dear, great poem. Remind me to lay out more lines, I keep getting back beautiful bountiful fish.
2006-04-01


Feiyn
beautiful poem!
2006-04-01


Bella_Laluna
I really enjoed reading this
had a picture in my mind
so beautiful


Bella Laluna
2006-03-31


UnforgivenAngel
wow,i like this.
(((hugs)))
love angel. xxx
2006-03-31


Cuddly Fox
glad to see you have joined the club with these chalenges but dont forget ylva and cuddly xxxxxxxxx
2006-03-31