We can.....

We can try to compete and reach goals up high,
but how about we just watch time sail by?

Everyone around us is stressed
trying to be their corporale best
And,

We can try to compete for the same goals up high,
but I think it's nicer
to just sit and watch time sail by.

02/04/06




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-04-02 at 08:23

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GB
Just to sit and watch time sail by ..... " ...LIKE this one L .... Thought the read touched my inner soul rather well .... and all so TRUE ....... Well done ! G
2006-04-03


Cr4Ky
nice! thats how we all should be trying to do..
just let it all fly by!
2006-04-02


Jon Hanover
Straight to the point very nice.
2006-04-02


Malin Johansson
This one was really good...
People have a tendence to stress way to much... wanting to have it all, right now...
But it's impossible to have it all... we need to sit down and take a deep breath sometime... to realice what we have...
~Very well written~
2006-04-02


Christian Ward
I agree
2006-04-02


Zoya Zaidi
"but how about we just watch time sail by?"
Yeah, how about it?
((((Hugs Lizzy)))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-04-02