A dog is a wondrous,priceless thing.


Jake

He's big at 80 pounds
White disheveled fur
Of a go dog not
A show dog

My helper in the garden
My companion on
Early walks
My guardian always

He hears my prayers
He intuits my moods
He fills my loneliness
He respects my thoughts

He lies there now
His favourite rug
Before a lazy fire
Dreaming as dogs
Do of squirrels
And such

If love exists within me
The kind that needs
No words then
He has mine

But sadness enters
My thoughts today
Jake is three
I sixty eight

One of us will stand guard
Over the other's grave
And feel the loss
That has no words






Poetry by josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-10-31 at 17:27

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Ferenc Inigo Beck
Ah Joe. Where is there a greater friendship,(or love).thanks for the memories,(bittersweet)
2012-11-19



Oh the build up... until the final stanza which drove the poem right through this reader's heart.... I remember the old "his master's voice" vinyl discs, with the red label.... I shall go away from this poem (for a momentary period) and weep... Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
2012-11-01



This is a good poem to go with "Birches" which the Editors posted today. They share a passion and a looking back, and an uncertainty about tomorrow, or an unease. Both are a bit darker than seen at first glance. Well done, and, the image of Jake before the fire in nice—it's nice when reality matches expectations.

jim
2012-10-31


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is very nice, Joe. It's simple and to the point (no doubt representing the temperament of both man and dog), but artfully written, and, unfortunately, true.
2012-10-31


countryfog
Indeed there are no words then, though sometimes, later, we can find them. If you've not read it may I suggest Robinson Jeffers' "The House-Dog's Grave." Jeffers was an unsentimental curmudgeon but even he was profoundly affected by his dog's passing. I had to put down my "best friend" earlier this year after sixteen years, it was, and still is, hard.
2012-10-31