Written 27.10.2012 A poem first written in English, then changed significantly when I rewrote it into Norwegian. The English translation of the final version is under the Norwegian one. This came to me while I sat in a forest a cold autumn morning, lookin


Sun

Eg fulgte solå
å hu
viste meg alt eg ikje konne se
i vakre silketråder å bare trær

Solå fant meg
der eg still satt
Å blenda meg
så alt eg såg
va lyse så flomma åver meg

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I followed the sun
and she
showed me everything I could not see
in beautiful, silken threads and naked trees

The sun found me
where I sat in a quiet silence
And blinded me
so all I could see
was the light flooding me




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Written on 2012-11-06 at 23:25

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John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
There is a subtle sense of serenity here....it is actually quite thought provoking. I like this. Thankyou for sharing it with us. *applaud*

Regards,
John.
2012-11-07