Ok I redid this poem because I think it loses so much meaning when one can't clearly see the two characters and each of their individual emotions. This was my fault. So hopefully this time it will be better :)


Forbidden Sanctuary V2

Can you stand the circumstance
Circumstance of that sin?
Will you go the distance
Will you hold me within?
MY HEART IS FROZEN WITHOUT YOU THEREIN
Therein lies the answer
MY ANSWER IS FORBIDDEN
AN ETERNITY FROM THE RELEASE
NOT SPACE, BUT TIME IS THE OPTION

YOUR VOICE REMAINS MY RETREAT
Your touch remains a fleeting dream
PASSION BEYOND MY INTENTION
Passion is key to the infliction
INFLICTION IS NOT MY REAL INTENTION
MY REAL INTENTION IS NOT FORGOTTEN
We're interwined within a labyrinth
OUR FEELINGS THOUGH, INTERWOVEN
Will you be the hypocrite?
WILL YOU STAND HYPOCRISY?
Desperation strains your voice
Desperation dilutes your potential

THIS REMAINS A DILEMMA
This remains our decision
'TIS MY FAULT
'Tis also my pain
Stand the circumstance
Together we'll bear the pain
MY HEART ACHES
My soul yearns
MAIDEN OF WAR, MY FAIR VALKYRIE
A sliver of a forgotten reality
YOU ARE FORBIDDEN
You remain my sanctuary




Poetry by Hasani
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Written on 2006-04-05 at 00:55

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