fragrance

necklaced around my sand
the raw freshness of
your voice
still beats
the most expensive perfume
in the world




Poetry by Lilly Negoi
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Written on 2013-01-18 at 01:51

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Rob Graber
I like the sense-mixing here: his voice smells (better than perfume). I can't seem to get the first line's "sand" though.
2013-01-18



Expansive thoughts in an economy of words. Nice job.
2013-01-18



All the world entire in a moment, a breath, a poem!
Cinematic splendour. Thanks for sharing.
2013-01-18