Hell Is More Severe On Earth

I told him he was full of shit he wouldn't do it,
He told me goddamit come here I'll even prove it,
So I walked in the steps he was making,
This was another mans life he was taking,
I thought this was just another joke prank,
I didn't know he had just been doing crank,
He walked to the man and kicked his face,
Pulled the trigger and forced him out of place,
I saw the blood and I saw the brains,
With every beat came blood from veins,
It made me sick I started to puke,
The boy screamed I got that gook,
Then I heard from behind somewhere,
Come here man ther is plenty to share,
I said I will pass as I picked up my gun,
And walked towards the setting sun,
I screamed at the general to come on over,
He ran said boys hurry up get into the rover,
Then out of the blue a bullet hit my chest,
The government didn't even send us a vest,
So I heard a man call my name,
He said he's gone it's a big shame,
I whispered with my last breath,
Please tell my mom about my death,
And tell my dad I loved him so much,
But then I lost my sense of touch,
The chopper came it but it was too late,
I was unwillingly forced into this fate,
I went up to heaven and then I was turned away,
I went to hell but the demons wouldn't let me stay,
So I came back to earth into my body and soul,
I was in the hospital in a nasty shitty ass whole,
I got a discharge when I got out,
But I was scared to try to shout,
My lungs are no good,
And I'm not in the mood,
I decided god wanted me in his big holy hands,
Plus I owed him for getting out of them lands,
So I went to church and they reached to me,
And I'll be damned if I didn't relize and see,
That heaven wasn't my home at all,
From then on I continued to just fall,
I died and now I'm in hell and it will not quit,
My life was one big hell so this isn't really shit.




Poetry by Justin
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Written on 2006-04-07 at 05:43

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Zoya Zaidi
Justin darling this is a very powerful write!
reads like a very interesting short story,
I kept reading inspite of my self,
Kept flowing with it naturally!
((((((hugs)))))
love,xxx, Zoya
2006-04-07