I closed my eyes the other day and saw this Dali picture unfold


A Daliesque Rhapsody

Poppy tetrahedrons and lupin blue spheres
Ivory columns wet with tears
Backdrop the portrait of the puppeteer
Who mocks the dolls while small crowds jeer
And time the jester disapears



Poetry by josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2013-04-15 at 12:57

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Well written, like it!
2013-04-17


shells
I love Dali and this is so fitting, your picture blooms with words.
2013-04-16


Hans Bump
I really like that you let the picture draw itself. That's hard to do(and brave) The results are inspired and beautifully artistic.
2013-04-15


countryfog
It occurs to me that while we often share a similar sensibility, you are capable of something startlingly surprising, utterly original, and I am not. When I close my eyes all I ever see (being myopic myself) is Monet's endless lilies on dappled water, canvas after canvas, much like my poems.
2013-04-15