A work in progress. Some of the spelling are deliberately '' wrong '' , so has to use the English used in my locality.


THE SOUNDS OF THUNDER

It were July 1916 , it thundered all week

That's , what I thought at the time

As I stood on the cliff top , looking towards France , you could just

See France , on a clear day , that week France woz so clear

The sound of thunder , broke the still , quietes of the day

Could be seen , lots of smoke in the distance from France it came

As I stood there looking , a bloke came stood beside me

He said nothfing , fore a while

Out of the corner of me eye , I saw he looked , fine , well normal , like

His left arm , eye , nose , lips and all , had a walking stick , apart from that

He looked fine , like normal , nothfing a miss

Then he spoke , I don't fink he noticed me , at first , like

'' Pore bastards , pore , pore bastards '' , woz all he kept saying

'' It's only thunder mister '' , '' It aint raining , likely '' '' it wont be so bad ''

'' And it's thundering in Frogy land , mister '' '' and they keep it over there ''

'' THUNDER , THUNDER! '' , '' YOU FINK THAT'S , THUNDER! , BOY!''

The bloke said , said to to me , proper angry he woz , at me like

'' Them are the guns '' , '' a lot of men catching it '' '' dieing '' , '' over there ''

'' Blown to bits '' , '' some goner end up like me '' he turned to me like

I could plainly see his other side , his right side , woz a mess , a proper mess

Red , scared , right nasty to look at , proper 'orrible '' , made feel proper sick , like

The right of wot was left of his face , looked like a slice raw pork

He had no right arm , his right leg look kind of gimpy like , he sure needed his

Stick

'' How old are you are you boy? '' , '' I'm 16 mister ''

'' Well , boy '' , just hope they get that fooking war over , before they come for

You ''

Two years , past , then they came fore me ,sent me to France , November , I

Copped it on the last day of THAT WAR , shell landed , blew me up

Took me arm me eye , ear , and half me face , leg as well

I stood on the cliff top , looking towards France , as I stood there that bloke stood

Beside me again as he had back in July 1916, '' I see they came for you then ,

Chum ''

'' Yea '' , '' and a gun took away my right side , arm and all , just like you ''

'' Then we are a proper pair '' , he said

We both went silent , only the sound of the gulls , breech our silence

Ken D Williams

The Dyslexic Wordsmith








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Written on 2013-05-04 at 22:16

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StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
Sad truth concerning life. When will we ever learn? :/
2013-05-05



First impression: This is excellent. But I'm not finished with this one. I'll be thinking on it.
2013-05-04