Critic (version 2)

In Fauve fashion

 

masking for Life,

 

fallible textuaries

 

pervade hallways,

 

vaulting their faults

 

inside libraries

 

where words grow old 

 

with merde  mold

 

in a realm beyond Belief.

 





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2013-06-09 at 00:34

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I like both versions but this on for me has the edge...only just of course but both are superb:)
2013-06-09